Tuesday, 25 January 2011
Beach
It was a hot but refreshing afternoon.Crystal blue sky with scoops of vanilla ice-cream like clouds, jade green waves gently mopping the soft sand bed. The sun was no where to be seen, hidden behind clouds, enjoying its rest. People with colourful outfits patterned the pure white beach with different sizes of foot prints. City was far from here, only tiny buildings could be seen from here. Listening to the soft splashing of the lapping waves, watching the tall, huge tree filled mountains behind the city, what a wonderful place to relax.
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Your descriptive writing is good in a way that you have included sensory devices such as sight and hearing. You can also use other sense like touch or smell and add in your imagination at the same time too. For example the touch of the wind or the smell of the water. Add in relevant words to make the effect sounds more dramatic and thus, allow the readers to feel as if they are in the story itself. Good job, keep it up!
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